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Because it won the poll, the next fic commentary is for Girl Anachronism.


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Okay, we all know the drill, now!


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Previous Commentaries: Chapter One Chapter Two


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So the big winner in the poll has been Your Boyfriend Snorts Cocaine, Mary Anne. Since the story is co-written, Nutmeg has done the commentary with me. Our comments are in italics and noted with an N or T. Also, we're not doing commentary for the whole story, just selected chapters. Here's our take on Chapter One!


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Snagged from a few people. And let me just say that it's really, really hard to be objective about your own fic/writing. You want to think that you've never screwed up, but since no one is perfect, chances are that you have.

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You post a topic, list, category, whatever, in my comments section (examples: "5 Reasons Jayne Loves River" or "5 Times Wash Made Zoe Laugh" or "5 Pickup Lines That Worked for Sawyer"). Then, I'll post the answers to all your Top 5 ideas, according to me. Serious or fun! Then you post this offer in your own journal, if the mood takes you.


Okay, I'll write anything Firefly. But I'm also willing to try Buffy, Angel, or Veronica Mars. So bring it on, ya'll!


*waits with a kind of bad feeling*


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Prompts To Date

Angel:

Five People Wolfram and Hart Were Too GOOD To Represent
Five Things Marcus Hamilton Could Say That Would Make A Woman's Ovaries Explode
Five Times Marcus Hamilton Actually Liked Angel As Opposed to Hating Him With the Fiery Passion of a Thousand Suns
Five Times Marcus Hamilton Shirked His Responsibilities

Firefly:

Five Ideas Jayne Had For a Birthday Present For River That Fell Through
Five Reasons Serenity Needs Jayne
Five Reasons Simon WANTS River to Be With Jayne
Five Reasons Zoe Has For Living
Five Things Inara Learns Aboard Serenity
Five Things No One Knows About Jayne Cobb
Five Things Shepherd Book Learns Aboard Serenity
Five Times Jayne Didn't Want to be a Dad
Five Times Jayne Got Respect
Five Times Jayne Wanted to Kill Kenny (But Didn't) - outsourced to curikitten
Five Times Jayne Was Smarter
Five Times Jayne Won and River Lost
Five Times Mal Was Wrong
Five Times River Thinks Jayne Isn't the Man for Her (And Five Times She Knows He Is)
Five Times River Wondered if She Should've Chosen Jayne Over Kenny
Five Ways to Show Love Without Sex
Jayne's Five Favorites

Veronica Mars:

Five Cases Veronica Would Never Take
Five Times Beaver Almost Told the Truth About Woody