i'm not here

Betcha you thought I forgot about doing this, huh? Well, here it is, more commentary. I plan on doing the first three chapters and the last three chapters.


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And we're all through with this story's commentary. Thanks for reading!

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Previous commentaries: Chapter One Chapter Two Chapter Six Chapter Ten


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Okay, we all know the drill, now!


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Previous Commentaries: Chapter One Chapter Two


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So the big winner in the poll has been Your Boyfriend Snorts Cocaine, Mary Anne. Since the story is co-written, Nutmeg has done the commentary with me. Our comments are in italics and noted with an N or T. Also, we're not doing commentary for the whole story, just selected chapters. Here's our take on Chapter One!


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