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Series: Persephone
Title: Chapter Seven (7/7)
Author: Toxic Corn
Rating: R
Disclaimer: Firefly is owned by Joss Whedon. I own nothing, sadly.
WARNING: This deals with some dark subject matter that may not appeal to everyone. Also, this is an AU where River never went to the Academy and Jayne never joined the Serenity crew. So if you're really into canon, this fic is not for you.
Summary: Jayne has to make a few decisions.
Notes: Written as a gift to [livejournal.com profile] sandwch__zombie. Here's to you, sweetie!

Catch up on earlier chapters at the organizational post.


CHAPTER SEVEN



Jayne sat at the bar and thumped his empty bottle down. “Gimmie another.”


The bartender nodded and slid one down. Good man. Must’ve seen him when he walked in and knew he was going to need a few. This place was just around the corner from his apartment and it felt like a second home. Seemed the place to sit and lick his wounds before taking the first transport out of here. Hatchett wasn’t going to be happy to find both River and Jayne gone.


What was he going to do now, anyhow? Maybe it was time to go legit. This kind of work was wearing on him, ever since that job on the firefly. Now River had put a face to all the suffering he'd caused and there was no way he could go back to that.


Gorramn girl. He’d had a headache when he’d woken up. Pissed him the hell off but then she had to go and be sweet and leave some meds out for him. Had to admit though, a girl her size taking out a big guy like him brought about a surge of respect. Maybe a little bit of something else, too.


He pulled out the napkin and stared at it. The ketchup had long since turned brown and was starting to flake a little. Maybe if we’d met under different circumstances... What did that mean? If they’d just met on the street, maybe the two of them could’ve…


Yeah, right. He gulped down half of his drink and set it down. Probably should go a little easy on the alcohol. Hadn’t he heard someplace that if you had a possible concussion you weren’t supposed to go drinking?


What the hell did it matter, anyway? Hatchett was going to find him. And if he didn’t, the girl was like to bring the Feds down on him. She just had to look at them with those big, pretty eyes of hers and say the mean man had taken her away and he’d never see the light of day again. Those eyes could make you do anything.


A warm, female body pressed into his side. Normally, he was all for gettin’ some trim but now wasn’t really the time to be thinkin’ with his John Thomas.


“Listen, girlie, you’d have better luck-” He turned warily to the woman and startled back in surprise. “River?!”


“Quiet!” She grabbed his head and planted a wet, messy kiss on his mouth. Stunned, Jayne didn’t respond and when she pulled back, all he could do was gape at her stupidly.


“We don’t have much time,” she said, urgently. “The federal agents or whomever were working for my father all along. They’ve killed your partner and now they’re coming for you.”


“You kissed me,” Jayne said, slowly blinking.


River gave him a look. “Yes. I find you attractive but mostly I didn’t want to draw any attention to us. Most males and females in here are intimately entwined and I wanted us to fit in.” She suddenly looked worried. “Was it bad?”


“It was kinda quick, maybe you should do it again.” Jayne leaned towards her and she gently pushed him away.


“Later. We have to get you out of here. It didn’t take me long to find you, but I had your name to work with and they don’t. Still, they’re the government and can find out anything. They could come through that door any minute looking for you.”


Jayne frowned. “You’re worried about me?”


“Well, I’m worried for me, too,” River admitted. “They were helping my father in exchange for my attendance at their school.”


“And they’re lookin’ to collect.”


“Affirmative. So leaving now instead of having a panel discussion here would be in our best interests.”


“What’s all this ‘we’ go se?” Jayne asked, shaking her off his arm. “You’re not gonna want me around, girl.”


River stared at him blankly. “I'm not?”


“No! Hell, you’re all young and full o’ promise or whatever.” Jayne shook his head. “You’d just be wastin’ yourself with me.”


“Jayne, we really need to go.” River grabbed his arm. “Please be insecure later.”


“But-”


River sighed. “Jayne, I care for you. And I implied in my note that if we had met under different circumstances, perhaps something could’ve worked out between us. But guess what?” She leaned closer. “These are new circumstances. If you don’t want to be with me, fine. But I’d feel better if I saw you safely on a transport than sitting in this bar pouting to prove a point when the federal marshals show up to take you away.”


Jayne looked at her a moment and then slapped cash on the bar. “Well, what the hell are we doing sittin’ around here for?” Grinning, he took her hand and the two of them slipped through the crowd to the backdoor.


“I don’t got much,” Jayne told her. “But I think I can get us transport on a small ship. Can’t promise it’ll be nice.”


“I have some money,” River said. “Mostly money set aside for me when I came of age. I had to withdraw it bit by bit at different machines on my way here; my father will probably freeze my account when he sees I’ve gone.”


“How much?” Jayne asked, curiously.


“It’s not five hundred thousand,” she said and smiled when he held the door open for her. “But it could get that ship you’ve been dreaming of.”


He reached out and linked their fingers together. “Shiny.”


They were long gone by the time alliance federals stormed the building.


~*~


Four months later...


“And this one here,” the salesman said, “is a real beaut. She’s got some miles on her but if you’re lookin’ for somethin’ to getcha all over the black, she’ll be true.”


The salesman glanced at the little wife, who seemed to be the one calling the shots. She and her husband wore their newlywed status like neon signs; he’d been helping her through the shipyard, letting his hands linger on her waist as she beamed up at him. Reminded him of when he and his own wife first got together.


“It’s a firefly,” she said, softly. “Are you all right with that?”


“Yeah, this one’s a later model.” The man looked to the salesman. “Can we take a look inside?”


“Of course. She’s not all prettied up inside, I’m sorry to say.”


“My Rio here’s pretty enough to make up for it.” The man wrapped his arm around his wife’s shoulders as she smiled sweetly.


The salesman thought of his wife again and figured it’d been too long since he’d brought flowers home. Maybe he’d get some and surprise her. He showed the couple around the ship, sure to point out that there was plenty of space for cargo transport.


When they’d got to the cockpit, Rio asked if she and her husband could have some time to talk about it.


“Sure,” the salesman said and thumbed behind him. “I’ll just be out here when you folks need me.”


They waited a moment before speaking. “I think it’s perfect, Johnny.”


The man made a face. “I don’t think I like that name much.”


“It’s better than a girl’s name,” she said, teasingly.


“Hey,” he growled, but pulled her close to kiss the top of her head. “Think you got the better end of the deal, though. Rio’s a shiny name.”


“We aren’t supposed to be discussing our names,” River reminded him. “What do you think of the ship?”


Jayne looked around. “I think with some work, she could do just fine. And she’s in our price range.”


River clapped her hands excitedly. “Then we’ve found her!” She spun in a circle and beamed at him. “Persephone.”


“Don’t think I like that name much, either.”


“Hades is too dark, Johnny,” she said, sitting down in the pilot’s chair. “No one would trust it.”


“Sounds tougher.”


“Well, Persephone is associated with the concept of re-birth. And we’re starting a new life together.” She held her hand out to him and the sunlight glinted off the gold ring on her finger. “Don’t you find that appropriate?”


Jayne held her hand with his own ringed one and they shared a soft smile. “When the heat’s off of us, I’m gonna marry ya for real, magic hands.”


“I’m holding you to that promise,” she said, giving his hand a squeeze. She smiled as he practically melted in front of her.


“Hey, I think we made our decision!” Jayne called over his shoulder.


“Yes, Mr. Hobbes?” the salesman ducked his head in, looking hopeful.


John and Rio Hobbes grinned at him. “We’ll take her.”


THE END



< Chapter Six :

Date: 2006-12-14 07:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] winkingannie.livejournal.com
Yay! Loved it.

Date: 2006-12-14 07:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] toxic-corn.livejournal.com
Thank you! :)

Date: 2006-12-14 07:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kittykat1979.livejournal.com
So happy their together at the end !:)

Date: 2006-12-14 07:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] toxic-corn.livejournal.com
Aww, I'm glad. Thanks for reading!

Date: 2006-12-14 07:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] pequenop.livejournal.com
*squee* That was a wonderful ending! I loved their name changes. I'm so sad to see it end, but it was great while it lasted.

I can't wait till you write something else.

Date: 2006-12-14 07:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] toxic-corn.livejournal.com
Thank you very much! I'll do some writing over break and we'll see where that goes.

Date: 2006-12-14 08:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mores0ul.livejournal.com
*Sigh* what a great way to round up the series.

“Jayne, we really need to go.” River grabbed his arm. “Please be insecure later.”

No nonsense!River kicks butt. =P

All in all, I really enjoyed the series! =)

Date: 2006-12-14 10:43 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] toxic-corn.livejournal.com
Thank you very much!

Date: 2006-12-14 08:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] karanina.livejournal.com
AWWW!!! What a sweet ending! Smart ol River withdrawing cash from different places! I love this story! Their new names (Rio is VERY cool), and the naming of the ship Persephone (both from a rebirth perspective and where they met). All very sweet and mushy stuff (in a good way).

Lovely story!

Date: 2006-12-14 10:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] toxic-corn.livejournal.com
Thank you! I like the name Rio too, but then I end up getting the Duran Duran song stuck in my head, lol.

Date: 2006-12-14 09:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] anjabeth.livejournal.com
Very, very spiffy series. The happy, shiny ending made up for the tears about Serenity's crew. :)

Yay, you! Thanks for such a fun read. :)

Date: 2006-12-14 10:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] toxic-corn.livejournal.com
Yeah, it was tough to write this from the perspective that Mal and Co. were dead but I'm glad you still liked it anyway.

Date: 2006-12-14 09:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aikiariyen.livejournal.com
So many good lines!

And it helped make me feel a bit better before I go and work something like 13hrs today.

Date: 2006-12-14 10:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] toxic-corn.livejournal.com
Ugh, work. I hope someone tips you a million dollars!

Date: 2006-12-15 03:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aikiariyen.livejournal.com
Me too.

But I'll probably settle for something.

Not one of my customers tipped last night.

RUDE!

Especially when they were the first to arrive and the last to leave, meaning the sick waitress had to work the longest. I didn't get home from work until midnight. Got to bed around 1:30 and hacked up my lungs until 3ish when I might have gotten some sleep.

I feel deadededed. Just glad that 7.5hrs of work is in a nice, comfortable, airconditioned office. With a computer.

Date: 2006-12-14 09:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crazywriterchic.livejournal.com
Freakin' squee! I love it! I think this is one of the best AU's out there. Ranks right up there with Neroli's unfinished Ballet and Bullets. So pretty.

Date: 2006-12-14 10:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] toxic-corn.livejournal.com
Wow, thank you. That makes me feel a little better about my next fic which will also be an AU.

Date: 2006-12-14 10:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] momin8r.livejournal.com
i really enjoyed reading this. I saved my comments until the end this time. i got very choked up when i read about serenity and the rest of the gang. i was very sad....i loved the ending and my favorite line was from river "please be insecure later". and they bought a firefly!! yea! thanks for sharing and i look forward to reading your next endeavor. take care :D

Date: 2006-12-14 10:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] toxic-corn.livejournal.com
Thank you. I apologize for the tears but at least I made up for it with the happy ending, right? (The thing about me: I can't write an unhappy ending. My inner marshmallow just won't let me.)

Date: 2006-12-14 11:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] momin8r.livejournal.com
and i thank the gods for that inner marshmallow!! i can't handle depressing endings! :D

Date: 2006-12-15 12:20 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] angel932.livejournal.com
What a great end to this enjoyable story!

Date: 2006-12-15 02:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] toxic-corn.livejournal.com
Thank you! :D

Date: 2006-12-15 12:27 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thecricket.livejournal.com
I absolutely adore this story from beginning to end and it's going straight into my memories :)

It's sad knowing they'll never be able to meet up with the rest of the Serenity crew, but having Jayne help kill them added such a believable twist to the story.

On a lighter note, I loved River taking control of the situation and getting them both to safety and Jayne's brain freeze after getting kissed was utterly adorable :)

Much love for this fic :)

Date: 2006-12-15 02:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] toxic-corn.livejournal.com
*squees over being memoried* Thank you so much. It is sad that they can't join the Serenity crew but when I started picturing the possible crew they'd put together later, I see Shepherd Book joining them as a passenger.

I'm so glad you liked this; I was concerned because this was so different from what I usually do. I mean, look, there's a plot! :P

Date: 2006-12-15 02:45 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fluties-flake.livejournal.com
Perfect ending.... This was such a wonderful read (I always love AU) and while I did miss the crew, somehow I think in a few years 'John and Rio' will have their own little rag tag crew of their own :-)

*huggles*

Date: 2006-12-15 02:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] toxic-corn.livejournal.com
Awww, *huggles back* I'm glad you liked. Maybe one day I'll get an idea for a sequel and everyone can meet the "rag tag crew" Johnny and Rio assemble.

Date: 2006-12-15 02:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] incorporeal-x.livejournal.com
“It was kinda quick, maybe you should do it again.”

haha that was a great line.
I'm sad this is over though

Date: 2006-12-15 06:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] toxic-corn.livejournal.com
I'm sorry, maybe one day I'll get an idea for a sequel. :) Thanks for commenting!

Great story!

Date: 2006-12-15 03:56 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] annie866.livejournal.com
Another wonderful story!!! The part about Jayne killing the Serenity crew tore me up though. Especially the part where he described killing the little girl... :-( I had hoped that at one point they would meet up with the Serenity crew at one point. But loved loved the ending, especially the thought of them eventually getting married. Thanks!

Re: Great story!

Date: 2006-12-15 06:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] toxic-corn.livejournal.com
Thanks for reading! :D

Date: 2006-12-15 09:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] guinny-hamilton.livejournal.com
I was copying lines that I thought needed mentioning in a comment but there were just too. damn. many!

Sooo shiny... such a sweet ending and they look so happy! I especially love River's dialogue through all this *hugs you*

*walks away singing 'Tox rocks'*

What? It's a song!

Date: 2006-12-16 05:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] toxic-corn.livejournal.com
Yay, thank you for the serenade! :D

Date: 2006-12-16 09:03 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaynedancing.livejournal.com
“Please be insecure later.” Greatest line ever :D

Wonderful ending.

Date: 2006-12-17 04:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] toxic-corn.livejournal.com
Thank you very much!

Date: 2006-12-17 11:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mysteriousaliwz.livejournal.com
Nice fic :)

I especially like Jayne suggesting River should have another, longer attempt at that kiss ;)

Date: 2006-12-19 08:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] toxic-corn.livejournal.com
Thank you. :)

Date: 2007-09-20 12:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hyacinthian.livejournal.com
So I've read all your Rayne fic now, and I thought I'd comment on one instead of leaving individual comments on all of them. I really want to thank you. Your Rayne fic is excellent, but beyond that--I've been having a crappy time dealing with things, and so far, your fic has pretty much been the only thing to pull me out of my miserable stupor.

You have their characters down pat, and to top it all off, Rayne seems so plausible when you write it. And it's fluffy to boot, most of the time.

I just wanted to tell you that your writing really affects me in a good way and that, no matter what, just know that your writing inspires people and just raises their mood.

You're a great writer, and I hope you never stop writing.

Date: 2007-09-20 02:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] toxic-corn.livejournal.com
I've been reading about your troubles adjusting to school and now I wish I'd said something, even though the only things that came to mind at the time were the unhelpful cliches I was given when I went to school somewhere I hated. You know, "give it time, you'll get used to it" and "it's hard being away from home at first." But I'll say now that I know how you feel and if you really, really are uncomfortable and miserable and you don't forsee that changing anytime soon, then take the steps necessary to get yourself out of the situation. :) You don't have to purposely make yourself miserable just for the sake of "being strong." Sometimes it takes strength to recognize something isn't right for you and to change it. (btw, I got into Rayne fic when I was going to school somewhere I hated. I probably would've lost it and gone batshit if I hadn't distracted myself so thoroughly with fandom.)

Thank you very much for the compliments; they made me smile. :) They also make me feel guilty that my Rayne bunny bag has come up empty. But I've found that I can write Rayne when I'm given a prompt. Maybe sometime soon I can open up a Rayne request entry and see what happens. :D

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