Shepherd Book fic for [livejournal.com profile] annabelleofga's request

Nov. 12th, 2006 03:14 am
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Title: Five Things Shepherd Book Learns Aboard Serenity
Author: Toxic Corn
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: Joss Whedon owns it all. I own nothing.
Summary: A Rayne relationship develops under the good shepherd's eyes.
Notes: Written for the Five fic meme. If you have a whole lotta patience, go ahead and leave a request, maybe you'll get yours written before the next ice age. This one isn't my best, but this prompt had me drawing a blank. Sorry, [livejournal.com profile] annabelleofga

for [livejournal.com profile] annabelleofga



1. Knock First


Simon had asked Book to bring River her dinner. The girl had said she wasn’t feeling well and had missed eating with them. Concerned, Book was more than happy to help the poor child out.


Humming softly, Book slid her door open. “River, I have some-”


She sat in the middle of the bed, ripping up picture after picture, sobbing. “Not a child, not something to be toyed with, not yours, not yours, not yours!”


“River!” the shepherd set the tray on her dresser and rushed to her side. He reached out and stilled her hands, hugging her to his chest the way her brother always did. “Shhh, it’s all right, it’s all right.”


“Nothing will ever be all right,” she croaked, turning sad brown eyes up to look at him. Then she started to gather the destroyed pictures together, stuffing them under her pillow. “Shouldn’t have seen this. Should’ve knocked.”


Curious, Book picked up one of the torn pieces and looked at it.


There, in all his scowling glory, was Jayne Cobb.


END


2. Don’t Jump to Conclusions


“Jayne, could I speak with you for a moment?”


“Sure, shepherd, don’t gotta ask.” Jayne sat up on his weight bench, toweling off.


“Whatever is going on with River, you end it right now.”


Jayne stared at him blankly, then burst out laughing. “That’s a good one!”


“I don’t understand,” Book said, frowning.


His laughter continued for a few moments longer and then Jayne took a deep breath. “Woo. Think I got more of a work out there than with my lifting.” He gave Book a serious look. “I don’t got anything goin’ on with the doc’s sister ‘n if I find the bastard who said I did, he’s losin’ one o’ his-”


“All right!” Book interrupted, holding up his hands. “My mistake.”


Jayne watched the shepherd walk away shaking his head and started to think.


END


3. Eavesdropping is Impolite


“What lies are you tellin’ about me, girl?!”


Book looked up from his reading. There was no mistaking Jayne’s booming voice.


“I’ve told no falsehoods.”


“Then why’s the shepherd think we got somethin’ goin’ on?”


“I couldn’t say.”


“Oh, ya couldn’t, huh?! Now, why is it that I don’t believe ya?”


“Stop screaming at me!”


“Then tell me the truth!”


“Because I gave up!”


“What th-”


Quickly, Book rose to his feet and opened his door in time to see what looked like confetti hit Jayne right in the face as River slammed her door shut.


“Ya crazy bitch!” Jayne hissed and stormed away.


Book took a few steps into the hall and looked at the paper on the floor, noting without much surprise that they were the ripped up photos.


“It’s impolite to eavesdrop,” River’s voice said, quietly disapproving.


END


4. Don’t Judge A Book By Its Cover


“Shepherd.”


Book paused on his way to the stairs, finding Jayne lounging on the common room couch.


“Look at this.”


Jayne handed Book a partial piece of photo, taped together where River had ripped it. “Why’s she got pictures of me all tore up?”


“I don’t know,” Book said. “I saw her do it, so I just assumed that you two had a… dalliance that hadn’t ended well.”


Jayne laughed, humorlessly. “I ain’t been doin’ any dallyin’ preacher.” He looked down at the photo. “What do ya think she meant by it when she said she gave up?”


“What do you think, Jayne?”


The big man’s eyes lit with surprise and then he shook his head. “Naw, she can’t, that ain’t it. Not with me.”


“But-”


“It ain’t me.” Jayne crossed his arms, looking off to the side. “Someone like her…”


Book watched Jayne’s face carefully. “Son, maybe you should consider-”


“Forget it, shepherd.” Jayne took back the photo and stared at it a moment before slipping it into his pocket.


Simon and River came through the door just then and went into the med bay, chattering with each other. Book looked at Jayne and saw the longing in the mercenary’s face before he schooled his features into his usual scowl and slouched his way up to the bridge.


Amazing. A man who practically oozed confidence on a daily basis could become self doubting at the possibility of a young girl rejecting him. There was much more to Jayne Cobb than met the eye.


END


5. Giving the Benefit of the Doubt


For weeks, Jayne and River tiptoed around each other. Book noticed but realized that no one else did. He didn’t feel like it was his place to say anything so he waited to see how things would play out, feeling a little uneasy all the while.


The night of River’s twentieth birthday brought his lone uncomfortable knowledge to an end.


What are you doing in my sister’s room?”


“Think it should be pretty obvious, Doc.”


“Well, you just… you just put your pants on right now!”


“’m kinda busy.”


“You’re b- CAPTAIN REYNOLDS!”


“You’re gonna tattle on me?”


“Simon, really, you’re being an ass.”


“I won’t stand by and have my sister molested by a… a…”


Book stepped out of his room and found Simon in River’s doorway, puffed up with rage. “Simon!” he said, sharply.


“Shepherd!” Simon jumped but then looked relieved. “Tell me you agree that this situation is abom-”


“No.”


“No?”


Book gently tugged Simon out of the doorway and slid River’s door shut. “She needs to grow up, Simon.”


The doctor looked offended. “I know that!”


“I don’t think you do.” Book shook his head. “River’s a grown woman now who needs to start making her own decisions. And she chooses Jayne.”


“Why?! He’s a… a…”


“He may not be the most polite, well-spoken man in the ‘verse but he’s never going to hurt her.”


Simon frowned uncertainly. “How can you be so sure?”


“I’ve gotten to know Jayne a little over the years. Maybe you should give it a try yourself.”


“What if he does hurt her?”


Book considered this a moment. “Between the two of us, I think we can show him the error of his ways.”


Simon grinned. “Let’s hope it doesn’t come to that.”


The doctor reluctantly went up to the bunk he shared with Kaylee and Shepherd Book started to go into his own room.


“Hey, shepherd?”


He paused. “Yes, Jayne?”


“Thanks.”


“Don’t prove me wrong, boy.”


“I won’t. That’s a promise.”


THE END

Date: 2006-11-12 09:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sheofthenoname.livejournal.com
Wow! This was like a whole story in half a page. I didn't want it to end.

Date: 2006-11-12 06:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] toxic-corn.livejournal.com
Yeah, I think this is the second shortest thing I've ever written. I'm glad you enjoyed it!

Date: 2006-11-12 11:35 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] guinny-hamilton.livejournal.com
*loffs on you*

Book's POV rocked. Insecure!Jayne rocked. Sad!River rocked.

Can I just say that in short, the whole fic rocked?

Date: 2006-11-12 07:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] toxic-corn.livejournal.com
*is loffed* Thank you, I'm glad it rocked! *loffs on you too*

Date: 2006-11-12 12:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] samson28.livejournal.com
Very nice! Enjoyed thoroughly. Nice to see a fic where Book is alive too. :)

Date: 2006-11-12 07:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] toxic-corn.livejournal.com
I miss Shepherd Book when he's not around so it's nice to write him when I can. Though I usually have no idea how to. Glad you liked it!

Date: 2006-11-12 03:48 pm (UTC)
mystic_notions: (Rayne)
From: [personal profile] mystic_notions
I miss Book. It's good to see him alive every once in a while.

Great story.

Date: 2006-11-12 07:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] toxic-corn.livejournal.com
Yeah, Book was great, I miss him too. Thanks for reading.

Date: 2006-11-12 03:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] curi-o.livejournal.com
Loud Chinese talking. Does that sound anything like a Chinese restaurant? (just for the reference, you understand. I'm sure loud American English talking sounds kind of like nails on a chalkboard.)

I know you know I'm totally curious about what happened that Shepherd didn't see between four and five.

*magically transforms an otter into a bunny and gives it messenger pigeon dna*

Date: 2006-11-12 07:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] toxic-corn.livejournal.com
It sounds like an overly excited Chinese girl screaming into her cellphone. My ears were ringing, man. Ringing.

As for the fic, I'm done with the prompt, no sequel, nothin'. Feel free to fill in the gap yourself, though.

Date: 2006-11-12 07:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ceslas.livejournal.com
that was excellent. Love how Book went through the journey with them... and his responses were super. Uncertain;Jayne *Hugs*

Date: 2006-11-12 08:36 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] toxic-corn.livejournal.com
Thank you, glad it worked for you. :)

Date: 2006-11-12 08:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] brithistorian.livejournal.com
Very nice! Two thumbs way up! Like [livejournal.com profile] guinny_hamilton said: "Insecure!Jayne rocked. Sad!River rocked." It's a side of the characters I'd like to see more of. :-)

Date: 2006-11-12 08:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] toxic-corn.livejournal.com
Sad!River was actually a lot of fun to write in a really twisted way, so maybe I'll attempt more fic like that in the future. But since I hate writing angst, I'll have to pay it off with a happy ending. That's just how I roll.

Date: 2006-11-12 08:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] brithistorian.livejournal.com
I'd rather have a happy ending any day, anyway. And as much as I enjoy a bit angst from time to time, I can't write it to save my life (well, maybel to save my life, but otherwise the humor and the happiness and the fluff just creep in), so I perfectly understand. :-)

Date: 2006-11-12 08:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] angel932.livejournal.com
Yay! You wrote Book! I miss him in so many of the stories. I got really involved with this and I'm sorry it was so short. :)

Date: 2006-11-12 09:05 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] toxic-corn.livejournal.com
This looked much longer in Word so I was surprised by how short it looked here. I'm glad you enjoyed it all the same.

Date: 2006-11-12 09:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaynedancing.livejournal.com
“’m kinda busy.” Oh dear, hoot's of laughter, Jayne being a little cocky (groan, no pun intended) for a man who may be on the receiving end of surgery at any time.

“Don’t prove me wrong, boy.” That could have been a moment as precious as Book's special hell speech. :)


Date: 2006-11-12 11:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] toxic-corn.livejournal.com
Thank you! I think Jayne can't resist a smart-ass remark, even if the end result could be something not good. ;)

Date: 2006-11-13 03:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lattelady6.livejournal.com
I was beginning to think Jayne would never catch on....I'm glad you showed him the error of his ways.

Date: 2006-11-13 08:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] toxic-corn.livejournal.com
And if he messes up again, Book and Simon will take care of him.

Date: 2006-11-13 09:22 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] karanina.livejournal.com
Loved it! Loved that Shepherd was on their side, and ESP Simon's whole "put your pants back on" line which was priceless!

Date: 2006-11-13 05:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] toxic-corn.livejournal.com
Thank you!

Date: 2006-11-13 07:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] misshigherpower.livejournal.com
“Well, you just… you just put your pants on right now!”


“’m kinda busy.”


Oh, that was priceless. Great job.

Date: 2006-11-13 11:30 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] toxic-corn.livejournal.com
Thank you! :)

Date: 2006-11-13 08:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] moondreamer1.livejournal.com
Well, I loved it. Even if you didn't think it was your best.

Date: 2006-11-13 11:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] toxic-corn.livejournal.com
Thank you very much. :)

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