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Series: When I Was A Boy
Title: Don't Let Me Be Misunderstood (3/12)
Author: Toxic Corn
Disclaimer: Firefly is Joss's but Jamey is mine.
Rating: PG
Summary: I'm just a soul who's intentions are good...
Notes: Sequel series to Songs From a Firefly. Check out the Organizational Post of this series for earlier chapters and a really bitchin' banner! (I know I said I'd be updating this fic every Thursday but I've decided to change my posting schedule to twice a week: Monday and Thursday. I missed Monday so I'm posting today.





They didn’t have much time before they had to meet Mal and the others. River had packed the kids’ stuff last night before their uh, celebration so there wasn’t much to do on that score. He’d stopped the post for the summer, having it relocated to Ma’s. He’d been packed for awhile now so they were fine there.


Looked like they were ready to-


Jayne patted his pocket.


Ruttin’ hell. His grandfather’s watch was gone. Sure, the damn thing didn’t work but Gramps had given it to him the day before he’d kicked and it had sentimental value. He didn’t go no place without it.


“River, you seen my watch anywhere?” Jayne asked, looking through the bedside table.


“No,” she said, not looking up from changing Nettie’s diaper. “Try one of your bags.”


“Good idea,” he said and went out to the living room where Jamey was fiddling with some whatsits on the carpet. He didn’t really pay any mind since the boy was always tinkering with something and started going through his bags, cursing quietly. No watch.


“Hey, Jamey?” he said, knowing he was really stretching. “You seen my watch?”


“Yup, I have it right here.”


Jayne’s head snapped up and he saw the whatsit Jamey was fiddling with was none other than his priceless, irreplaceable watch. Its insides were strewn all over the carpet and Jamey was holding it up with a big damn grin on his face.


What the hell did you do?” Jayne bellowed and snatched the watch out of the boy’s hand. Just like that, Jamey’s grin fell and tears filled his eyes. Normally the sight nearly broke Jayne’s heart but now he was too pissed off to care much. “I told ya time ‘n time again t’ leave my stuff alone! Do I monkey with the stuff ya got in yer room?!”


“No, sir,” Jamey said, chin quivering. “I’m sorry, I was only-”


“Only what?! My grampa gave me this watch, I told ya that! It’s special t’ me and I don’t got any other grampas to keel over and gimmie their watches, so I don’t need you breakin-” All this time, Jayne had been shaking the watch near his head, to emphasize his point when a strange sound caught his attention.


The watch was ticking.


He looked at it, completely dumbfounded.


“I was only fixin’ it,” Jamey said, his tears spilling. “It was s’posed ta be a surprise for you.”


Jayne rubbed his face with his hand. “Aw, Jamey, I-” What the hell was he supposed to say? Here his son was trying to do something nice and Jayne had to give him hell. With that kind of negative reinforcement, he’d be surprised if Jamey did a good deed ever again. “I’m sorry, Baby J. I didn’t know.”


Jamey sniffled and started picking up the watch pieces, not looking at him.


“You did a good job, here. Mr. O’Toole in town couldn’t even fix this.” But he could see it was too little too late for Jamey and the boy quietly dropped the cogs and wheels into Jayne’s hand before leaving the room.


~*~



They’d just taken off and Jayne found River in their bunk, reading a story to Nettie and Jamey. All three of them looked up when he walked in, and Nettie was the only one who seemed happy to see him.


“Jamey. C’mere.”


The boy tucked his head under River’s chin. “Ma’s readin’ us a story.”


“I know, but she can read ya a story any ol’ time. I wanna show ya somethin’.”


“Go on, Jamey,” River said softly.


Reluctantly, the boy got up and followed Jayne up the ladder.


“Where we goin’?”


“You’ll see.”


Jamey looked confused the whole way to the engine room. Kaylee grinned when they walked in.


“Hey, you two!” she said. “What’s up?”


Jayne grasped Jamey by the shoulder and pushed him forwards. “Kaylee, I want ya to show him everything you know about the engine. The boy’s got smarts for machines like you do.”


Kaylee looked excited by the idea of passing on her knowledge. “Sure! C’mon over here Jamey and meet Serenity!”


Jamey grinned and looked up at Jayne. “Thanks, Papa.”


Jayne cleared his throat. “Well, go on ‘n learn somethin’.”


Before he left, Kaylee watched from the corner of her eye as Jayne puffed up with pride and smiled to herself.


END


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Date: 2006-10-24 07:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] curi-o.livejournal.com
I think you might have meant "Looked like they were ready to--"

In addition, Jayne is so good-hearted, he just makes me feel the warm fuzzies. He still screws up liek woah, but he's learned that instead of sulking or hiding or lashing out when he feels guilty, he should put effort into making things right. He's not a bad guy at all. He is, in fact, slightly more emotionally intelligent than I. He's a good dad. I wouldn't mind having him for a father. I suppose I'd rather, you know, the other, but it doesn't really signify what I'd rather, given that Jayne is fictional, and, depending on your source, dead. *is still grumpy about character death*

Date: 2006-10-24 07:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] toxic-corn.livejournal.com
Meh, I was writing how Jayne thinks but if it bothers you I guess I'll fix it since others might have the same complaint.

I think the sight of Jamey's tears kept him from doing any of those things he'd normally do. And maybe he's matured a little over the years.

And he's not dead yet.

Date: 2006-10-24 07:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] curi-o.livejournal.com
Oops. Clearly with the over-editing brain here. I think I just got confused with the verb tenses. Anyway, cheers.

And... I just talked to a semi-browncoat! We had this conversation about dorks and geeks and nerds and Joss Whedon and... *sigh* For last Christmas, he bought his then-girlfriend all seven seasons of Buffy.

All seven.

My friend Stoner has already crush-claimed him for her own, though, so I will temper any crush of my own that might have formed.

Date: 2006-10-24 08:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] toxic-corn.livejournal.com
I had one of my friends in my room last night to watch Firefly but when 8:00 rolled around, I told her we had to shut it off so I could watch Doctor Who. I was fully expecting her to make fun of it but to my surprise, she really liked the show and informed me that I had good taste. :D (Plus, she'd seen the old 70's episodes with the Fourth Doctor so she was already familiar with the Who concept.)

I think I'd have more luck getting her into Angel than Buffy, however.

Date: 2006-10-24 08:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] curi-o.livejournal.com
I love that icon! Look! It's a wee little puppet man!

You know who make me sad? The people who give me mocking looks when I say the words, "Joss Whedon," "Buffy," "Angel," "Firefly," and "Serenity." I mean, at least with blank looks there's hope. They are potential converts (or addicts, oh noble pusher). I've decided that enthusiasm is definitely one of the best ways to convert people, though. Being enthusiastic about the Josslove gets people interested. Get people interested and they give it a chance. Then they convert. And that's the point.

Someday, in the distant future, I wonder if people will have a religion devoted to the teachings of Whedon.

Also, did you know he has a scriptwriting brother? He does. I can't decide if it would be cool to be related to Joss or suck to be in the same business as a guy with such a hugely devoted following.

*wanders off wondering about relationships between people I've never met... again*

Date: 2006-10-24 08:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] toxic-corn.livejournal.com
I haven't met anyone who gave me a mocking look for liking the Joss. Probably because it doesn't come up often. I've found that selling people on Firefly takes showing them the movie first. Then when they watch the show, they're a little weirded out by the western element but they know the characters are great and stick around, eventually getting used to the weirdness and then fully embracing it. At least that's how I got my roomate and our friend hooked. Plus Wolfy, but I don't plan on having him in my room ever again. *shudder*

Date: 2006-10-24 07:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] guinny-hamilton.livejournal.com
“Only what?! My grampa gave me this watch, I told ya that! It’s special t’ me and I don’t got any other grampas to keel over and gimmie their watches, so I don’t need you breakin-”

This was so perfectly Jayne, I could just hear him say it. Very very well done, again!!

*is jealous*

*anxiously awaits Thursday*

You totally sold me on the kids thing by the way, I usually shy away from fics like that although I have read some good ones in the (recent) past... but this is just awesome and totally the way it would have played out!

Date: 2006-10-24 07:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] toxic-corn.livejournal.com
Aww, thank you! I'm a total hypocrite; I write kid fic and don't read it. Well, I read [livejournal.com profile] crazywriterchic's Angel series but it's not really kidfic though there are kids in it. It's weird of me but eh, I never claimed to make any sense.

Date: 2006-10-24 07:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] etzyofi.livejournal.com
Absolutely ADORABLE. I love how you write the children. They're so realistic and perfect and JAYNE.

kghaskghsa. THANK YOU. Your fic makes me want to die from happiness.

Date: 2006-10-24 07:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] toxic-corn.livejournal.com
Thank you very much! Don't die! You'll make everyone sad! :(

Date: 2006-10-24 10:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] angel932.livejournal.com
This is very realistic... first Jayne yells and then he realizes the situation and does a great fatherly turn-around. Good work!

Date: 2006-10-24 10:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] toxic-corn.livejournal.com
Thank you. Jayne loses his temper from time to time but he's still a good father.

Date: 2006-10-24 10:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aikiariyen.livejournal.com
*grins a ridiculously big grin*

Date: 2006-10-24 10:16 pm (UTC)

Date: 2006-10-25 01:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jaynedancing.livejournal.com
Still feeling ridiculously maternal, it's worse with Jamey. I think because I have a daughter and maybe I'm projecting some sad subconscious desire to have a son... oh dear,*slaps forehead* therapy is not cheap.

Stuffing up but making it right Jayne gives me the major warm fuzzies too. :)

Date: 2006-10-25 05:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] toxic-corn.livejournal.com
I know, right? Sometimes when I write these, I start wanting kids right now but then I have to remind myself that this really isn't the best stage of life for me to be having one. I think the school tends to frown on babies in the dorm rooms.

Date: 2006-10-25 07:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crazywriterchic.livejournal.com
I completely get Jayne's state of mind here. Glad he fixed his mistake. So a-cute-able!

Date: 2006-10-25 11:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] toxic-corn.livejournal.com
Thanks! Jayne's changed over the years but I think the sight of a valued possession in pieces would throw anyone off.

Date: 2006-10-29 11:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] karanina.livejournal.com
Jayne really needs to think before he reacts - although his way of appologising and making up for it were very cool!

Date: 2006-10-29 11:27 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] toxic-corn.livejournal.com
He's learning. Rome wasn't built in a day, after all. :)

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