Jayne worrying about River because he's away overnight is just great and I like that the two realise they miss each other. Kaylee forgetting about Mal in the delight of gossip is wonderful! Poor Mal *cuddles him*.
I love the progression of the relationship between Jayne and River. The getting to know you type things are so cute. I'm doing a similar thing in a Jaylee fic I'm trying to write. And you've given me some ideas - hope that's ok?
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Date: 2008-07-06 11:36 pm (UTC)I love the progression of the relationship between Jayne and River. The getting to know you type things are so cute. I'm doing a similar thing in a Jaylee fic I'm trying to write. And you've given me some ideas - hope that's ok?