So the big winner in the poll has been Your Boyfriend Snorts Cocaine, Mary Anne. Since the story is co-written, Nutmeg has done the commentary with me. Our comments are in italics and noted with an N or T. Also, we're not doing commentary for the whole story, just selected chapters. Here's our take on Chapter One!
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